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WELL, MOM
Contributed by
emystar
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Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 04:37:07 AM in AEST
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Here I'm the mammaw
2 yrs. younger than u was
when we put that
worn out physical body away.
Never thought I'd see it, this day.
Well Mom, U r still my
very bestest friend
Well Mom, our hearts
still connect, well Mom.
connected thru luv line,
well, Mom
Been a long 23 years
but U never left me one time.
Now Dad-n-you can
zip thru space,
in, out with luv
any place.
Nuthing can separate
eternal luv
as my angels,
Dad, Mom.
U have heavenly strength
that can space accross
any length.
2 Mom
Helen L. McCool
Copyright ©
emystar
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2003-11-20 04:37:07]
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Re: WELL, MOM
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by Aika on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 05:11:03 AM AEST
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| SO lovely ! Great you have such relationship with Mom and Dad.. :-) aika:-) |
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Re: WELL, MOM
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by venkat on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 05:19:50 AM AEST
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These lines are really beautiful..
"Nuthing can separate
eternal luv
as my angels, Dad, Mom.
U have heavenly strength
that can space accross
any length."
My parents are stillwith me..I love them a lot
as you loved your parents..
well.. peace, love and joy.. venkat
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Re: WELL, MOM
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 05:34:15 AM AEST
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| Beautiful dedication! |
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Re: WELL, MOM
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:53:12 AM AEST
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Awww Emy.... this is lovely... my Mom passed away in Jan of 1979.... they must be having a cup of coffee together in Heaven and smiling down on us....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: WELL, MOM
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:53:16 AM AEST
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Hi to you:).long time no see (my fault).
I always like dedicated works because ot the meaning and honesty that accompanies them.
I particularly like the line - 'Now Dad-n-you can
zip thru space,
in, out with luv
any place.'
Best reagrsds to you
Terry
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Re: WELL, MOM
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 09:39:55 AM AEST
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Lost my mum when I was a young mum of one at 19.I never knew she was my best friend until she took her last breath.I read this with both happy and sad tears.Sad because of the loss,yours and mine remembered.Happy because it was written so beautifully and mostly because I am stoked you always knew your Mom was your best friend...((((emy))))
Sharon(LW) |
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Re: WELL, MOM
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by 13Hopes on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 09:46:16 AM AEST
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I love it. Losning your mum is a hard thing to cope with, even after many years.
Cheers
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Re: WELL, MOM
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 03:25:32 PM AEST
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Awwwwwww , this is nice.I'm sure she is looking down on you and smiling right now
take care
steve |
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Re: WELL, MOM
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 11:28:50 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel mines been gone since 2001,It never gets easier! This was touching! Christina |
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