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Heaven and hell @ Human beings
Contributed by
venkat
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Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 01:16:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Heaven and hell are found
In the hearts of men
If a man realizes God in his heart
He can create heaven for others
If a man realizes devil in his heart
His selfishness creates a hell for others
Our books are as meaningless
As the corpses of our fore fathers
When we fail to find presence of God
In the hearts all beings
Thrust those decadent things
On the heads of people blindly
And the tree of knowledge will never
Flower with fragrance of love divine!
The deep rooted cancer of religious
Fanaticism has been afflicting
The unfortunate human beings
Millions of men were killed and
Innocent women were raped and burnt
Neither Krishna nor Buddha nor Jesus
Can cure this even if they come again!
20-11-2003
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venkat
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2003-11-20 01:16:22]
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by emystar on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 04:12:13 AM AEST
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Very good writing my friend!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by venkat on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 04:26:05 AM AEST
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there is a small type mistake in fourth line of the poem..
" can creates " may be read as " can create"
thank you Emy for your first comment..
venkat
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by Aika on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 05:23:05 AM AEST
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Dear Venkat
having these thoughts in my head so often
I agree with you completely
Wonderful writing , I loved it. aika:-) |
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:43:37 AM AEST
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Excellent work, my friend.... so true...
hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 08:09:24 AM AEST
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excellent
Shari |
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 10:31:20 AM AEST
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| Durn good my man! I liked it a lot. |
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 07:35:11 PM AEST
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Very well written!
mckayla |
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 11:53:31 PM AEST
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| Sobering and powerful ! Well done venkat--Russ |
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by kalika_vidya on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 01:14:22 AM AEST
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| Truthful always..an excellent work..K |
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 02:06:57 AM AEST
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dearest venkat, exceptional poem, my, these lines are wonderful:
"Thrust those decadent things
On the heads of people blindly
And the tree of knowledge will never
Flower with fragrance of love divine!"
many good points here, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by chandramohan on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 06:21:57 AM AEST
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a kind hearted man will see only heaven before him.an unkind(cruel) person will create hell to all.
let goddess of creation will shower love and
affection to all human kind.
thanks to venkat for his best presentation on
to realise good and discard bad.. |
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 03:36:39 AM AEST
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wow this is a great reality of the world great expression in this
peace joy and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Heaven and hell @ Human beings
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by Qohinoor on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 10:24:16 AM AEST
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Heaven and hell are in man's hands,
Only he not the Gods shapes his destiny,
Come! friends! let us traverse the lands,
And cross the fiery seas to ultimate beauty! |
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