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Till I end
Contributed by
Redemption
on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 12:30:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A black taint on my heart
never to be cleansed.
Corrupted, diseased,
never to be pleased,
till I end and eventually drop dead.
A red mark on the wall
counting down the friends,
that come and go like the neverending snow,
in a simple but natural flow.
The taint grows stronger as the
list of marks grows ever longer.
Never will there be a day,
that people stray, from their
destined fate.
For Pain and Sorrow will always
follow Hope and Joy.
Copyright ©
Redemption
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2003-11-20 00:30:56]
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Re: Till I end
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by emystar on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 04:51:11 AM AEST
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Good writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Till I end
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:12:21 AM AEST
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A good write yes...your words true - the last line...pain and sorrow follow hope and joy - true!
Emma. |
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