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Blessed beat
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 12:17:41 AM in AEST
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Feel the beat
live the sound.
Feeling it deep
letting it take over.
Next to you
beside and inside.
Blushing crimson red
touching and feeling.
Feeling your body
and how you're moving.
Flush can't get enough.
Hips together meeting
even eyes locked
tight together.
Having you in
both our minds.
Dancing close in
perfect rhythm......
The book of the faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-11-20 00:17:41]
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Re: Blessed beat
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 12:19:53 AM AEST
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| ooo, love it... nice image here. :) |
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Re: Blessed beat
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by emystar on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 04:54:13 AM AEST
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Sounds heavenly!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Blessed beat
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:29:05 AM AEST
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Lovely imagery... Enjoyed this... The first 4 lines made me think of our Carnival here...with the steel pans playing..the sound of which somehow takes over a person's head...lol...
Jenni |
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Re: Blessed beat
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by venkat on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 02:27:04 AM AEST
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| Oh, lovely.. venkat |
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Re: Blessed beat
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 10:21:54 PM AEST
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| nice feelings.......wow......come on now dont stop here ...want to read some more..hehehe...meow.....sandy |
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Re: Blessed beat
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:59:32 PM AEST
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Cor was just getting right into that.........
It ended to soon lol
Brilliant is there a part two
Love
Angelxxx |
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