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That Night and Day
Contributed by
positivelypurple
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Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 05:03:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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You struck me like a hurricane
On a calm summer's day.
You were a burst of color
In my sky full of gray.
As we tumbled and twisted
Time sailed away.
You turned my life around
On that Night and that Day.
You loved me for a moment,
Then drove me insane.
Our music played on
Through an undertone of rain.
You stared deep into my soul.
I had to look away.
Soulmates collided
On that Night and that Day.
Laughing, hugs and smiles,
I begged you for more.
Soon you would leave me.
The rain began to pour.
Your love renewed my life
In an unexpected way.
I will always remember
That Night and that Day.
Copyright ©
positivelypurple
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2003-11-19 17:03:06]
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Re: That Night and Day
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 05:58:27 PM AEST
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Wow, this poem is amazing..... You really did an awesome job. It's just smashing.....
God bless,
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Re: That Night and Day
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by RebeccaBoucher on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 06:06:16 PM AEST
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| I really like this, the structure with the repetition of the title works well! |
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Re: That Night and Day
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 06:17:49 PM AEST
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Wonderful write!!!
Mckayla
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Re: That Night and Day
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by Rachel on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 06:36:04 PM AEST
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| Great poem! I really loved the repetition from the title, keep writting. |
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Re: That Night and Day
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:12:08 PM AEST
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Passonatly beautifull even tho sad.
U r a pro and all your writings teach valuable lesson in life, you've learned in the pain.
Great work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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