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Fate

Contributed by misstressdistrubed on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 04:40:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Time stands still
As I swallow this pill
Then chase it with a beer
Here come all the tears

My life passes before my eyes
And I keep asking myself why
Why did God hate me so
Why do things go the way they go

I lie here in despeeration
Trying to escape temtation
Thinking of my past
How the years went so fast

But now it is all gone
And to them I say so long
Maybe I will see you at the gate
When we recive our fate

Copyright © misstressdistrubed ... [ 2003-11-19 16:40:53]
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Re: Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 06:59:30 PM AEST
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Oh, I hope you see brighter days.... I send hugs..... There's one line in there that I'm questioning, though, everything else is excellent writing. "Why did God hate me so". God loves you deeply, greatly, passionately..... He always has and always will..... I guess, if you don't believe me, then, OK..... But even if you don't love him, he'll always love you. No matter what. I'm guessing you put it in to prove your point. It's just, if that's what you really think of God, then I wanted to tell you what I really think of him.....

I'll shut up now. I'm sure you don't want to hear me ramble =)
It really was a sensational peice of work. You did very well.
I hope you feel better, misstress....

God bless,
Jellybellyprincess

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