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The Unknown
Contributed by
mckayla
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Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 12:38:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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smooth rocks collide at the bottom of a river
like an endless battle of life
that leaves a cold shiver.
timeless fights along the way
driving forces of insanity
through every waking day.
Mountains suffacate with every cold breath
trying to support life
unaware of the closeness of death
triumphs of darkness fills the sky
blinding the unknown
that passes by.
Copyright ©
mckayla
... [
2003-11-19 12:38:01]
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Re: The Unknown
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 12:53:26 PM AEST
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wow...that really grabbed me! Such a weakness I have for the dark writes..lol..and this one is great!
Very well done, Larry |
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Re: The Unknown
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by venkat on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 02:30:18 AM AEST
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| captivating with a dark shadow. venkat |
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Re: The Unknown
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 01:46:57 PM AEST
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Chilling write...good imagery..
Jenni |
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Re: The Unknown
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:10:51 AM AEST
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| I really shivered in the river I can really feel the chill in this poem |
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