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Crescent Moon Calls
Contributed by
full_blur
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Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 04:48:25 AM in AEST
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Crescent killer strikes keen
in my vision this late
calls in a tone heard lower
than warning in growl
Prompts liquid sideshows
of movement half pebble late
A single scarlet gasp slides
on once white cobblestone in daylight
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full_blur
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2003-11-19 04:48:25]
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Re: Crescent Moon Calls
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 12:59:44 PM AEST
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kinda gave me the creeps!!! But I enjoyed it!! Great write.
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Re: Crescent Moon Calls
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 06:50:41 AM AEST
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| i cant understand! see, im an indian from the amazon! so, better change your linggo! i really can't understand! what's that linggo? is it cantonese? or chinese? or filipinese? or americanese? or japanese? just wana ask.. |
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Re: Crescent Moon Calls
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by full_blur on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 09:20:33 AM AEST
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| well actually, if you subscribe to the idea that poetry is not prose, and therefore should have deeper connotations that need to sought after, then the meaning of this poem should not be immediately obvious. In other words, I'm asking you to read between the lines and find out for yourself =) |
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