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The World Out There

Contributed by Cora-Windover on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 09:48:37 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Rules bend and rules break
There's only so much I can take
Before I make
A big mistake

Love is harder than you know
There's only so far I can go
Before I go
Insane.

For all her crazy truth and lies
There's something special in her eyes
That's saner than the world out there
Don't tell me that I shouldn't care

Before I try to run along
Before I know it, she'll be gone
Don't wait too long
Don't string along

It's almost more than I can take
This loving, wanting, is it fake?
Don't try to make
Me sane.

For all her crazy truth and lies
There's something special in her eyes
That's saner than the world out there
Don't tell me that I shouldn't care

For every step along this road
Is one more step that leads me home
I've tried to lie, I failed, who cares?
She's saner than the world out there

And every time she looks at me
Like I'm the only one she sees
It's better than the world out there
Don't tell me that I shouldn't care




Copyright © Cora-Windover ... [ 2003-11-18 21:48:37]
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Re: The World Out There (User Rating: 1 )
by rachelreed1 on Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 11:56:01 AM AEST
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To me this poem shows a man holding on and afraid that his world would colapse if he let go. Then again that's just my perception. Good poem!


Re: The World Out There (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 05:05:36 AM AEST
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This isn't that... A more appropriate description would be a man holding to their beleif, or rather, love for their significant other, for true love conquers all. He loves her all he can, no matter what others think.

As far as i can tell, that's what it means.




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