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Within My Dreams

Contributed by Dragons_Of_Rose on Sunday, 25th August 2002 @ 07:45:15 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

You came to me within my dreams
Reopening a door into my past
Replenishing a picture long dissolved
Of the man my childhood once tightly grasped.

You came to me within my dreams
Bestowing a silent message upon my ears
One I've yet to tear apart and seek out
Possibly waiting for you to save my tears.

You came to me within my dreams
Awakening the memory of you once again
So grandpa, tell me, what brings you here
Why tug at the scars I've hidden so deeply within?

Is it because I'm heading toward the same mistake as before
Not spending time with the ones I really should?
Keeping my distance from a father and his family
Is there something I'm missing that could do some good?

Or are you just trying to burden me
Drown me with my own sorrow and pain?
Reminding me of a teenagers brutal mistakes
And cursing me for a heart so vain.

Could it simply be that I was thinking of you
A happy passing to restore some light?
Tell me grandpa, what brings you here
What's the message I missed within the night?

Copyright © Dragons_Of_Rose ... [ 2002-08-25 07:45:15]
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Re: Within My Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 08:48:36 AM AEST
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very nice, A fine write
Your grandpa is probably your gardian angel and is by your side constantly.

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