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Nothing Left But Motivation's Abandonment

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:46:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I watch as the liquid passes down my window
And I wonder of today

Never able to catch myself from falling
Unable to find the words to say

Expressing these emotions
Passing these constant tests of ability
Can't find my motivation

Beyond me, where things fail
And my life has nothing left
Back to where we all came home
Remembering those things I said

Passion surrounds my logic
And motivation seems so surreal

Can't seem to explain myself
Or really how I feel

Knowing that I love you
Growing to accept
Moving away from misery
I still have nothing left

Allowing all my beginnings
To finally reach their end

Where could I find my future?
Why should I be waiting?

Turn over to my other side
The one that disappeared
Caught me fleeting and failing
Endulging what I feared

Things could last forever
If only allowing me to wait
Making the person who finds tomorrow
Letting go of all my hate

Can't seem to find my closure
As if I actually wanted to
Can't seem to hide exposure
What else can I do?

Falling wasn't hard
When it was falling in love with you

Feeling nothing left
With emptiness at hand

Couldn't walk away then
And I won't run away as you have

I'll sit here and confront my feelings
Contend with all my doubt
Face all the equations of my life
Finally figure them out

My motivation's abandonment
Met with my life's inhibitions

Can't seem to bring myself away from you
God, give me something to hold

I'd forget all my whispers
All those love-filled words in my ear

Losing you again tomorrow
Grappled by my fear

Promise me something
Swear to me anything

I'd trust you tomorrow
As I felt for you today
I'll miss you all the time
Can't find the words to say

Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2003-11-18 19:46:15]
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Re: Nothing Left But Motivation's Abandonment (User Rating: 1 )
by Eve on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 09:39:04 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem, I can feel the emotion conveyed here. Lost, empty, pained... I could relate. I hope you do find your words, someday, your explanation for not having them is beautiful.

Keep writing!
-Eve

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