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The Edge of Evermore
Contributed by
doug
on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 05:30:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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once I saw a castle on the
edge of evermore
basking in the sunlight of
a everlasting dawn
in the flower gardens jasmine..
does forever grow
the ivory is does flourish and
climb unto the walls
the prince and the princess
are walking hand in hand
and up in the tower the
wizard he is setting
for there is no strife or hardship
in the land
and each and every day a new
love is beginning
the taverns are all busy and
singing does abound
from the drunken patrons
that are sitting there within
greed and death and hatred
are nowhere to be found
no enemys to greet you only
family and friends
and now I'm always saddened
when I have been awakened
for something has been taken
or so it always seems
but I know that the castle on
the edge of evermore
will come again when I am in
the comfort of my dreams
Copyright ©
doug
... [
2003-11-18 17:30:45]
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Re: The Edge of Evermore
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:45:43 PM AEST
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WOW...... that is all I have to say..... I'll say it again.... WOW.....
Really, that was fabulous writing...
; )
Jelly |
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Re: The Edge of Evermore
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 06:11:31 AM AEST
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| Even though it is a dream.. beautifully touching. venkat |
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Re: The Edge of Evermore
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 07:27:36 AM AEST
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| love this poem, and your title is excellent! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Edge of Evermore
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by RainbowQueen on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 02:37:32 AM AEST
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| I adore this kind of poetry...I call it gothic. Hope to read more like it:) |
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