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The Unattainable One
Contributed by
harshreality
on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 04:17:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I know your past is full of grief.
You chose so carefully who to let in,
Then they'd turn their back and leave.
It was never about love,
Only the pursuit...
Holding on, only to see if they could break you.
The unattainable one...
They just had to get close
Facing a constant challenge -
Trying to prove who loved you most.
I sat on the sidelines
And refused to take part.
I couldn't stand to be just another contender...
Chasing after your heart.
I know you thought I moved on,
But thats simply not true.
I stayed behind;
All the while still loving you.
I had others in my life,
But it was never the same;
They saw it in my eyes,
I could not hide the pain.
They chose to ignore,
And look the other way...
Ignorance is bliss;
But I couldn't live a lie -
Thats why I never stayed.
And here we are once again.
You know I love you,
So why continue to live your life this way?
When will you realize...
You just let the wrong ones in?
They never saw how special they were,
Only cared about being labeled -
Your girl.
I was never that shallow...
Always loved you for you.
They stole your heart,
To shove in each other face...
Now, no matter how hard I try...
The pain they've left;
I can't erase.
Copyright ©
harshreality
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2003-11-18 16:17:46]
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Re: The Unattainable One
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by spiffyphil on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 04:36:55 PM AEST
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| Great poem - i know where you're comin from. |
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Re: The Unattainable One
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 08:20:48 PM AEST
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Ouch......A very pain filled write my friend.
Well done! Larry |
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Re: The Unattainable One
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 09:24:59 PM AEST
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This is so sad, but so well written...
Jenni |
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Re: The Unattainable One
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 03:06:47 AM AEST
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An exceptional poem about an oft repeated
saga in the lives of many young people Many lines pinpoint familiar aspects.................
Twice I went through such an experience (long ago) but reading your poem it seemed like yesterday
great write.
bob |
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Re: The Unattainable One
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by juliette on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 10:41:12 PM AEST
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Wow! Takes a great write to get a wow out of me.....giggle,giggle~ I so feel this poem. I will read it over and over! Thanks for sharing!
juliette |
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Re: The Unattainable One
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by irshprnss on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 04:56:59 AM AEST
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I am speehless..... GREAT JOB!!!!!!
diana |
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Re: The Unattainable One
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:05:34 PM AEST
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| again holy *****.... sorry but this is amazing how smiliar my life is to this... how her life was to his i mean holy crap |
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