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Foundation
Contributed by
rachelreed1
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Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 03:33:05 PM in AEST
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Cast your eyes down to your feet.
Is not the ground you walk upon of earth and stone?!
Holding steady against great masses.
Your soul deserves the same foundation.
Without it, peril, short lives, and eternal fire.
Faith should lie as a foundation for your soul.
Grab the hand of Jesus.
Pull yourself up from the cesspool of sinners.
Live out you days in the Glory of GOD!
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2003-11-18 15:33:05]
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Re: Foundation
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 04:50:16 PM AEST
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This is great =) I like how solid you portray faith. It's so true--- God is our foundation. If we don't cling to him, we're hanging by a thread. We find security in him.
Great writing.
God bless,
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Re: Foundation
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 01:12:08 PM AEST
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| I liked the poem but I resent the cesspool of sinners part lol. Yeah, all souls, bodies, and minds need a solid foundation. Regaurdless of anything. |
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