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an angel
Contributed by
sidra
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Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:55:43 PM in AEST
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There is an angel knocking at my hearts door, should I let him in. Where is he going, where has he been. He is whispering oh so softly into my ear, his breath feels like kisses from butterfly wings, he says he wants to be here, to be near. His beautiful words makes my heart want to sing. I'm very frightened should I take that chance, should I run or should I stay. Could my heart take the pain if my angel left me one day. I think I'll open my hearts door, maybe just a crack. I'll hope and pray that if he leaves my angel will come back.
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by rachelreed1 on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 03:49:17 PM AEST (User
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Very nice poem |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by harmoni on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:54:54 PM AEST (User
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By the sound of your words .I felt I had went on a trip .Through your words.Beautiful said.
Harmoni |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:26:18 PM AEST (User
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very very nice sweet poem.. nice feeling inside when i read it.. sandy |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by lilch4ever on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:46:36 PM AEST (User
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Very good poem. Very sweet and hearfelt. Lovely write. |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Oriana on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 09:13:34 PM AEST (User
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Hello,
Very nice poem. I know how your feeling in this one. I`m at the point myself...lol.. Keep Writing. |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by nightwolf on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:47:33 PM AEST (User
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very beautiful |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:32:12 PM AEST (User
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Good write, sidra. |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by jjones12 on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:23:56 PM AEST (User
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great write, keep it up
=Jen= |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gigi_15 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:02:07 AM AEST (User
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This is a very very sweet poem..never let the fear of losing someone keep you from being with them. for you will regret what you did..but regret what you didn't so much more |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by OhSaige on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:58:37 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing.
OhSaige
-S-S- |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by OhSaige on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:07:38 PM AEST (User
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Very nioce :) |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Redhotchilichic on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 06:44:01 AM AEST (User
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This was pretty Good |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by BlindRomantic on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:33:59 AM AEST (User
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nice |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Writting_Fever on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:18:37 PM AEST (User
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Very nice poem. Its very sentual. i like it a lot |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by lillyjane on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:39:39 AM AEST (User
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I love Angel poems, this is a beautiful poemxx |
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Re: an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by helzwar007 on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:57:41 PM AEST (User
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good poem keep it up... i feel like i have an angel in my life... that would be brandon taylor... my love... check out my poems about him if u want to know more.... -sa-sa-b00ga-b00ga- |
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