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My White Dove, Chapter One
Contributed by
13Hopes
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Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 11:56:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I remember the day you went away.
I remember we both said goodbye.
Still i wonder how you knew.
Rarely i said i love you.
That morning i said it to true.
Fifteen years seem so long.
My memories remain strong.
Again let me say these words are true.
"Mum, I love you"
Jesus called " Jenny come work with me Another white dove"
JBC 19-09-1988
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Re: My White Dove, Chapter One
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:31:05 PM AEST
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| This is a cery sad write. I couldn't imagine losing my mother. I will be on the lookout for the next chapter to this poem |
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Re: My White Dove, Chapter One
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:31:42 PM AEST
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| Woops I need spelling lessons, I meant to say this is a very sad write. |
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