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About Myself
Contributed by
Drzewo
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Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:33:25 AM in AEST
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I want to be a ball,
I wanna be able to roll.
I don’t wont to be black one though
Cause it’s always the last one to go,
And I can rock already,
I am the leader; my mind is quite steady.
I cannot be a captain, despite
My leading skills, ambitions to fight,
The captain always goes last from the ship
I want to be the first one to take a sip
of water that sometimes is salty,
find the stairs first, talk to Almighty.
Then, I’d like to go back, tell the others
People shooting, screaming, killing their own brothers
That there really is something saying that taking this way
Will not help us to get to our aim and stay
ALIVE
Copyright ©
Drzewo
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2003-11-18 07:33:25]
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Re: About Myself
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:36:05 AM AEST
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| Beautiful and powerful! Peace be with you and always remember one love! Peace and serenitiy... |
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Re: About Myself
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 08:00:18 AM AEST
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Amen!
yeah!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: About Myself
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by Aika on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 09:07:02 AM AEST
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Great opinion, wonderful writing
aika:-) |
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Re: About Myself
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by Manicmuze on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:05:59 PM AEST
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Strong statements, powerful and intense poem. I enjoyed this, very well done.
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