|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Memories
Contributed by
harshreality
on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:01:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
You'd never guess the black of night
Hides a tear stained face;
In the light of day -
Everything seems so perfect.
Looking for something to hold on to,
Searching for a purpose...
Longing to move forward
Trying to forget the past...
Reaching for a destination,
Beyond all the doubt -
But its just too far out of grasp.
The sound of a heart breaking
Is silent,
Therefore; No one will ever know -
The feelings I hide behind a smile...
Or the memories that won't let go.
Copyright ©
harshreality
... [
2003-11-17 22:01:16]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Memories
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rissa on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:25:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I like the verse-form that that's written in.
And the overall poem's really good, too. |
|
|
Re: Memories
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:54:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I may know more than you think believe me.
This is a great open honest write, nice style as well. Welcome to YPDC Ill be watching for more of your work.
michelle |
|
|
Re: Memories
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:46:31 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Dear Harshreality,
Your name fits you well,
For inside of you is a heart that is blue!
Your poem was absolutely marvelous.
Will touch each heart of all of us!
Welcome aboard HarshR we are so glad you came to join us here at YPDC...
You'll find we are a very loving group, and will never leave you behind.
Lovingcritters and poets too.
ConSue |
|
|
Re: Memories
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:29:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Yes! I love the line " a heart beaking is silent"
Sadness beautifully penned,
Well done
Larry |
|
|
Re: Memories
(User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 01:03:27 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| that is so my laugh i laugh to hide the pain so no will know.... wow..... just.... damn |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
