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Angels do dance
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 09:07:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Angels dance around me
please tell me will this ever end?
Flashed to a place where
all time will stand still.
Knowing what I can
learning what I could.
Still though through it all
The angels dance around me
please tell me will this ever end?
Back to a place with lighting
crashing all around.
Beauty transcends and
gathers in front of me.
Yet, angels dance around me
please tell me will this ever end.
See her now in a new light
see a beauty that can ascend.
All in all I know it's true.
So now I see her in
that same blue gown.
She wore when she held me close
when all the time.
Angels dance around me
please tell me will this ever end?
The book of the faulty phoenix.
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-11-17 21:07:12]
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Re: Angels do dance
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 07:57:02 AM AEST
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wow! nuthing wrong with the way it is!
Great, beautifull, heavenly write!
yeah, they do!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Angels do dance
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 11:08:50 AM AEST
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Interesting write...with great imagery..
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Re: Angels do dance
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 04:56:16 PM AEST
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They danced for me
Great poem
Great words
Love
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