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SMOKE IN MY ROOM:

Contributed by Richard_Campbell on Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 09:06:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

KNOWING HOW I LEFT MY ROOM CLEAN AND NICELY SENTED.
I RETURN AND TO MY SURPRISE BACKWOOD BURNING SMOKE HURTING MY EYES, WAS IN MY ROOM.
WITH BOTH MY NIECE AND NEPTHEW HOME,NO ONE
WOULD ADMIT TO WHO WAS SMOKING IN MY ROOM.
CLOTHING SMELL OF SMOKE,CURTIN RUINE NO JOKE.
MY NIECE/NEPTHEW SCREAMING AND FIGHTING", I DIDN'T DO IT.WHY DON'T YOU TELL THE TRUTH."

18YEARS OLD TWIN,SO I SAID I HAD ENOUGHT.
PACK UP ALL YOUR STUFF,GET OUT OF MY HOUSE.MY SISTER KIDS WHO WON'T STICK TO MY HOUSE RULE.
NO SMOKEING ,NO DRINKING RUM,NO DRUGS THATS MY HOUSE RULE, I HAD ENOUGHT.
I PUT THEM OUT,AFTER I APOLIZED FOR SHOUTING BACK ALSO.

Copyright © Richard_Campbell ... [ 2003-11-17 21:06:59]
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Re: SMOKE IN MY ROOM: (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:21:10 AM AEST
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sounds like you had quite a day
michelle

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