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dear child
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c
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Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 08:33:40 PM in AEST
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dear child,
it's been a long time. you haven't called in a while. i miss our late night talks. i miss your loving smile. i just want you to know, i still love you. you're still my everything. i'm just sitting her by the phone, waiting for it to ring. we've lost touch somehow over the years. i just want to hear you laugh and dry your lonely tears. i know what you need but you won't listen to me. there's so much you don't know, so much you don't see. if only you would give me a chance, you would love me too. i love you more than you'll ever know. i would die for you. you see, I spend each waking moment knocking at your door. if only you would let me in, i would be all yours.
your Father,
GOD
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Re: dear child
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by mckayla on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 08:38:33 PM AEST
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wow. very touching! thank you for sharing this
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Re: dear child
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 05:04:01 PM AEST
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mckayla's absolutely right, this is a fabulous work of art. I've never thought of life that way.... through God's perspective. Not really. You did great, it's a really lovely write. And well needed here. The AntiChrist stuff around here is really discouraging. glad to hear from other Christians =)
God bless,
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