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Like An Angel
Contributed by
sindi-selde
on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 07:49:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Like an angel.
He flies...
Like an angel.
He loves...
Like a devil.
He looks...
Like a beautiful,
Beautiful devil.
He laughs...
Like an angel.
He talks...
Like a devil.
He acts...
Like a devil.
He is to me...
An angel.
He should be...
A devil.
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2003-11-17 19:49:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Like An Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by KiSwaters on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 09:04:58 PM AEST (User
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Nice way to step out of love and show perspective. I like how every stanza is a couplet, they're each their own epiphany and the elipse just add to the realization. |
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