|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Monster Inside
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 07:38:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
My life has turned so dark,
i cannot see hope from above,
my sense of touch is gone,
i no longer feel love,
My memory is battered,
who are my friends?
ive forgotten all that matters,
waiting for it all to end,
i no longer feel the sensation,
of blood rushing to my skin,
ive raised the walls to my soul,
so no one can come in,
Ive shut my ears to every sound,
so i wont have to hear my screams,
no longer do i sleep at night,
blocking out all my dreams,
ive hidden so deep in my fears,
all that i am too scared to reveal,
from wounds, and heartache, all the pain,
ive created a monster who cannot feel.
Copyright ©
Chanti
... [
2003-11-17 19:38:34]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Monster Inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by ToriVeigh on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 08:36:22 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I know that feeling. I'll hope the same thing for you that I hope for me. Some day, maybe the walls can be let down and feeling will return. Keep writing! |
|
|
Re: The Monster Inside
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 10:01:51 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this was beautiful although sad and heart-rending. I felt a lot of t his and can definitely empathize hope yer feelin better now.
Peace,
Joel (Bobo) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
