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Broken
Contributed by
Rachel
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Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:59:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why did you pretend
to understand me
Me and the feelings
You still break and bend
Whyd you say you knew
What was going on
And what I was going through
In my torn open soul
How did you manage
to completely control me
Somehow you molded me
Into what I didnt want to be
How could you pull
At my heart that way
I think Im broken
What more can I say
Copyright ©
Rachel
... [
2003-11-17 18:59:44]
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Re: Broken
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 10:13:15 AM AEST
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| Simply powerful write maam. Well done.---Russ |
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Re: Broken
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by HellsLibrarian on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:57:36 PM AEST
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Hey, Rachel. I like this one. Oddly enough, I wrote a poem with the same name, and a different style. I'd like you to read it and tell me what you think.
Angela |
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