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Love Waylay and Unrequited
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:28:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Supressed within my solitude
Exiled against my will
Yet wanting to stay alone forever
The tears I cry are crystal
For many years I have been trapped
In chains from never ending disgrace
'Tis too late to fix my mistakes
Loneliness has become my fate
In thy garden I dwell
In thy beautiful prison I call my home
As coldness overwhelms my heart...I am doomed to recollect
I am confined to thee and thee alone
I sing for thee the songs of old
The songs that I once loved
Yet now my voice has become frail
And I envy the voice of the morning dove
Too long have I payed the penalty!
Too long have I haunted your steps!
Everyone that has ever had a love for me has fled
Away from this hell, misery, and dread
They left me here to cry
Tears of crystal I shed
Frozen from the coldness of my heart
And remind me of a life once led
In your garden eternally I shall dwell
In your prison of beauty my heart yearns
In recollection of my lovers' faces
People that have never loved me in return
Now as night falls without a star
And as the last leaf from the tree falls
Forever I shall sing thy song
And cling to dreams deferred
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SkYYBLu
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2003-11-17 12:28:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love Waylay and Unrequited
(User Rating: 1 ) by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:41:31 PM AEST (User
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wow what a write, brillantly portrade, many feel this way to, thanks for sharing this, Val
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Re: Love Waylay and Unrequited
(User Rating: 1 ) by MarcoTheFish on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 02:56:39 PM AEST (User
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this is awesome
something i really enjoyed
thanks!
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Re: Love Waylay and Unrequited
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 07:04:41 PM AEST (User
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Absolutely brilliant........
Wow....
I have to say, unrequitted love is not a stranger to me either.... it hurts so badly.... I could totally relate to everything you said. It was so eerily familiar. Especially "too long have I haunted your steps". That is exactly what happens, right? Actually, I've got to go... I'm going to see my secret love in person in a few minutes.... But oh, how torturous it'll be..... I'll think of your poem when I see him, I know it....
Lovely write.
God bless, and hope for brighter days,
Ellen |
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