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Suicide Attempt
Contributed by
mercedes
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Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:56:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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How can you say you’ll leave me
After all we have been thru?
Why is it so hard for you to talk to me
To tell me what it is I do to you?
If I can’t get your attention thru words
If you do not care about my tears
Maybe my death will finally break thru
Were did you hide that gun
I place the cold barrel in my mouth
No, I’m not brave enough to do this
A knife, I’ll slit my writs
I start to saw back and forth
A little blood begins to flow
No, too painful and too slow
There must be another way to go about
Have no real medicine only Tylenol
Will three bottles be enough?
I begin by swallowing one at a time
Too slow, just pour the pills down my throat
I try to gag but take deep breaths
Wonder how long it will take
The bottle said do not mix with alcohol
Hmm, sounds worth a shot to me
Grab a bottle of Vodka
Sit down to watch some TV
Oh no, guess they were right
Tylenol and alcohol don’t mix
Can’t keep it down
Throw up all over myself
The pain is unbearable
My stomach is tearing apart
Those pills are eating me alive
Why did I choose this way to go?
I curl up into a ball
Now I really wish I could die
Don’t remember what happened next
Only know I woke up in the hospital
Tied to the bed
Guess I failed again
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2003-11-17 10:56:19]
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Re: Suicide Attempt
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by ArdRi79 on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 11:01:42 AM AEST
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| cool write and a traumatic read |
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Re: Suicide Attempt
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by SkYYBLu on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 03:14:33 PM AEST
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| Good write, I can totally relate sometimes. You should have just gone with slitting your wrists. (lol) NO! I'm just kidding. Don't do crap like that it doesn't solve anything. Supressed feelings can only lead to harm. Tell someone about this. Great write. :) |
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Re: Suicide Attempt
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 03:14:43 PM AEST
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| Good write, I can totally relate sometimes. You should have just gone with slitting your wrists. (lol) NO! I'm just kidding. Don't do crap like that it doesn't solve anything. Supressed feelings can only lead to harm. Tell someone about this. Great write. :) |
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