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Disturbed Memoirs Part III
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:18:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I grinned up at Troy
Trying to convince myself it was a game,
But when the sirens, the hated sirens
Stopped outside my house I knew I had been tricked
I screamed from deep within,
Kneed Troy in the groin, and bloodied his nose
I wouldn't let them keep me from my love!
I threw open the door and practically fell down the steps
With a look of surly, bloody madness on my face
I fell into the waiting arms of six cops
I knocked one down, but the other five pounced on me
I was thrown into a police car
And two burly cops got in and drove away
The other four talked to Troy
As I began to cry as I realized
Something else had been torn away from me
And that my heart had been burned by love
"I loved her!" I screamed at the cops
Fingers raking feverishly at the partition
Like some disturbed spirit from hell
The cops merely looked at each other grimly,
Smiled, and nodded in silent communication
I found myself outside an abandoned warehouse
Where they stopped and I thought they meant to kill me
Instead they got out and opened the back doors
Where the beat me from both sides with their clubs
Amidst my flailing arms and legs
Finally they decided they had had enough
"That'll teach you, you raping pig," one cop spat at me
Then I was thrown into a jailcell
Confused, bloodied, and weak
I had an 'adventuresome' night
Finally the trial rolled around
Where I realized I was charged with
Rape, kidnapping, assault of a cop,
Forceable confinement, and trying to escape the law
Most of the trial washed over me
Until the day they found me guilty
I saw Natasha she looked... older somehow
And she was with someone new
It broke my heart, even though I realized
I didn't have enough time for her
With all this trial business
I stared at her lovingly my eyes
Roving over her beautiful curves
I heard the jury say I was guilty
And something about a psychiactric assesment
And the judge asked if I had anything to say
I stood up and looked around the court a few timess
I locked eyes with Natasha and said,
"I love you despite your betrayal, *****!"
I screamed at her and I realized my groin was hungry,
But three guards jumped me
And hustled me outside lest the courtroom
Lynch me my words had so incensed them
I've been in jail for a month now
And I've had enough of being
Passed around like a dollar whore
I smile hearing Big Joe, I'm his ***** now,
Swear at a guard
I take out the razor hidden in my pillow
And say goodbye as I softly slice myself
I slit open my wrists and with wet fingers
Draw a cross on my chest for fun
I begin to fade as I cut from
My elbow to my wrist
And as my blood stains the bedding
And the razor clatters to the floor
I have a vision of Natasha,
Her fear, and my fingers defiling her
I swear I really did love her...
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bobotheclown
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2003-11-17 01:18:26]
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Re: Disturbed Memoirs Part III
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by sugar0986 on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:38:27 AM AEST
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Damn what an ending good job at it, this was a really good, i will continue to read your poetry.
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Re: Disturbed Memoirs Part III
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by emystar on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 02:28:15 AM AEST
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Very good writing!
I only caught the last two.
So is this a fantasy or what. Soyy I really don't know so iask.
Excellent wok!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Disturbed Memoirs Part III
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 07:19:05 AM AEST
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Wow, Joel, this was great...sorry about the tragic ending tho...
Hugs
Jenni
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Re: Disturbed Memoirs Part III
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:31:09 AM AEST
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Joel,
I hope you get this. This one was really good even though you might have to e-mail me the second one in case they ban it. It is under review... Lol you must have done something really bad mate! Hehe. |
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Re: Disturbed Memoirs Part III
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 06:50:37 AM AEST
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aww Joel, I'll miss you. I'll miss your poems aswell. This, like the first was rather sick in a way, maybe that's why I liked it so much *wonders* I didn't get to see the second one because it is under review, so I'm a bit lost as to what happened. Hopefully it will be posted so I can read it, otherwise I will just have to guess. Anyway Joel, hopefully we will see you back here oneday soon, with more poems, and hopefully everything is allright with you. Look after yourself, I'll keep my eye out for you when/if you come back. Buhbye for now,
(hugs)
Stacey |
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