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The Girl In The Mirror
Contributed by
Eternal_Darkness
on
Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 06:09:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I often wonder,
Sitting at my desk,
If there's another me.
Staring back at me.
From the loooking glass.
Another me...
Wouldn't that be something?
I wonder if she's got long hair,
Bright as the sun.
I wonder if she's got eyes,
Blue as the sky.
I wonder if she's as happy as she looks.
Another me...
Wouldn't that be nice.
I wonder if she's got money,
Enough to fill a pool.
I wonder if she's got jewel's,
Like the desert has sand.
I wonder if it can protect her like she thinks.
Another me...
Wouldn't that be odd.
I wonder if she's got family,
Complete with a good name.
I wonder if she's got friends,
That attend every single party.
I wonder if they ever notice when she cries.
Another me...
Wouldn't that be wrong.
I wonder if she's got cuts,
Which cover her arms with scars.
I wonder if she's got bars,
That keep her locked in forever.
Another me...
Would still be me.
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Eternal_Darkness
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2002-08-24 18:09:45]
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Re: The Girl In The Mirror
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 07:04:24 PM AEST
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Oh wow...this is amazing...but so sad! Just goes to show, not everything is as it appears to be. We should always look deeper than the surface. I hope someone does. This is the best poem I've read in a while. I had to read it twice! Amazing work!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: The Girl In The Mirror
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by chatabox on
Sunday, 25th August 2002 @ 03:35:20 AM AEST
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ah, but would this person be so talented and beautiful as you...I doubt it.
lovely lovely poem
Penny.
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Re: The Girl In The Mirror
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:34:20 AM AEST
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Nice!
I've oft stared into the mirror and thought things like (but not exactly like) this . . .
You have a ponderous mind. Keep it that way . . . |
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