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still
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:29:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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i lay still
because there
is nothing
else to do.
its so hard
to care when
noone else
ever does.
who is ever
around when
you are not.
i lie still
because its
the only
thing that i
can do well.
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fallensilence
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2003-11-17 00:29:59]
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Re: still
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by doug on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:50:12 AM AEST
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you have friends here if nowhere else
walk in peace and happiness your friend doug |
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Re: still
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 21st November 2003 @ 03:13:31 AM AEST
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It is an illusion. Only your mind thinks everything is still which is obviously not true.
You are functioning as a living creature. Nothing wrong with that and as you say it is of no concern to anyone.
You have made a concious decision which (for the moment) suits you and everyone alse.
If only a few more would do the same the world would be a better place.
You can change your mind anytime you like
Thats freedom. People die for that! |
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Re: still
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by P0rNStAr on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 06:39:17 AM AEST
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| aww i felt this one ='( |
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