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Oh, just stop it!
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:09:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Look here my dear,
come on over sit near.
Much to say and tell
'cause you know I've
been through all hell.
Please don't confuse
these stars in my eyes.
They aren't for you.
You know what all
of them do say.
I need to speak
and hope you comprehend.
My heart is not yours
and you haven't held
that still beating
thing for so long.
I've found myself dear.
So please stop trying
to hurt me I can't feel it
and you're just wastin' time.
Just get over yourself
'cause no ones that great.
I'm happy now theres no debate.
The book of the faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-11-17 00:09:57]
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Re: Oh, just stop it!
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by mercedes on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:38:33 AM AEST
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| Now if only they read this and know who they are. Good write. |
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Re: Oh, just stop it!
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by emystar on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 12:42:43 AM AEST
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Hi cobalt,
u get ten thumbs up for this one!
luv it! u go now, u got it going on!
Great work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Oh, just stop it!
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:36:45 AM AEST
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u write from an odd point of view there Jeff but its good nonetheless remember to give me some proceeds from yer book hehe.
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Re: Oh, just stop it!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 04:26:47 AM AEST
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Dear Jeff,
This poem is really good for learning....once you can pick them out.....then for them there is no yearning. This was an excellent poem indeed. Reading people so we don't get hurt is definitely a great need.
There are those that so sick they be....they'd rather make you unhappy, no matter what the fee. "misery loves company" the saying goes...and all my life....I've checked that out...
they are all around and all about. I really enjoyed this one, Jeff....because you are on to them now....they can't reach you once you know they are foul!
Wonderful Poem.
Warm Poetic Love,
Lovingcritters
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Re: Oh, just stop it!
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by Merry on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 03:34:47 PM AEST
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Hi Jeff
good advice in a well written verse.
i try to be careful with my heart these days
it's been trampled on lately - lol
merry |
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Re: Oh, just stop it!
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 05:44:05 PM AEST
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| nice write Jeff... :) |
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Re: Oh, just stop it!
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by mckayla on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 08:28:39 PM AEST
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Great write!! Hopefully they will stop!!
mckayla |
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Re: Oh, just stop it!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 11:26:59 AM AEST
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Great message here...liked this a lot...
Jenni |
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