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Into my realm
Contributed by
bbullgirl05
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Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 08:30:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Journey into my realm
and tell me what you see
for i can see nothing
My realm is a entangled mystery
which even Houdini could not unravel,
nor columbus could travel
Normality is my mask
average and untainted
Under the exterior is the less aquainted.
Seventeen years to figure what is disfigured,
the truth hasn't come out.
Seventeen more I will still be in doubt.
My realm is your realm
and everyone elses.
We hover together not really knowing each other,
nor ourselves
Into my realm,
into yours
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bbullgirl05
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2003-11-16 20:30:14]
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Re: Into my realm
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by doug on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:06:38 PM AEST
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| no i dont know myself but i know what i like and i like this poem, great work your friend doug |
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Re: Into my realm
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by Sonibe on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:11:32 AM AEST
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| ....I really like this poem....I understand, but I don't....I feel as though we have a poetic connection, but we probably don't....bravo, bravo.... |
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