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Open Wounds
Contributed by
zaowhvn
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Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 08:07:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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This is the end of a hundred beginnings
Time means nothing to me anymore
When did August come? Where did July go?
It's been so long since you reversed the rotation of my world
So why the pain is still strong?
Gone is my mind, I can't remember the last time I've slept
But when will I wake up?
Tonight there was a really bright star
In the darkest sky I've ever seen
This song plays at perfect timing when times aren't perfect
Does this mean there's still hope in darkness?
This is the beginning of a hundred endings
Scars don't hurt... they're just ugly
I still have open wounds
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2003-11-16 20:07:35]
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Re: Open Wounds
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by doug on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:12:07 PM AEST
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| hope your wounds heal and you live in happiness forever , great poem your friend doug |
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Re: Open Wounds
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 05:50:12 AM AEST
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| Awesome writing, bro. For what it's worth, I know what this dagger feels like. Poems like this are the only healthy way to release. Excellent work. |
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Re: Open Wounds
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by harshreality on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 10:37:52 PM AEST
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great. hears a line from a poem I once read. It's not one of mine but I think you might like.
' from open wounds ease refrain, until healing scars soothe the pain. Time has passed and done its part, but love still lingers with a broken heart.' I hate to post that without the authors name but I just can't remember it. anyway its true. Love will always linger , but unlike open wounds, scars only hurt from time to time. good luck |
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