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can't move on
Contributed by
harshreality
on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:22:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm reaching out for you, but no ones there;
My hand is filled -
With cold, lonely air.
A feeling I've grown acustomed to.
I've tried to move on,
But somewhere along the way;
My heart convinced my mind...
I couldn't live without you,
Now I can't accept your gone.
So every night I pray -
That god will lead you back to me;
And my emptiness will disappear.
Deep down I know,
This is where you belong.
Oneday I'll reach out and you'll be there,
No more lonely nights...
No more empty air.
Copyright ©
harshreality
... [
2003-11-16 18:22:01]
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Re: can't move on
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by RealmX on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:33:11 PM AEST
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| I think everyone that has ever loved someone can relate to this poem. I surely can. Great write! |
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Re: can't move on
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by loopylou on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 07:18:49 AM AEST
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| i to cant move on...and i know it sucks.....but time heals as a friend said.......goodwrite......dont bank your hopes on your love returning please |
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Re: can't move on
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by a_bear on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 11:43:15 PM AEST
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| Oh how did you know ? I can't move on either...but he won't come back, so what am I doing stalled on this track so another train can hit me????????? |
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Re: can't move on
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 12:56:08 PM AEST
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| now im tripping how i can read all your poems and be like yeah thats it thats how i feel |
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