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Scorched Heart
Contributed by
RealmX
on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 02:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I've seen your heart
Charred with deceit and lies
You're killing yourself from the inside
Hate springing forth from that deep rift
Check your pulse
Should you be on this earth?
You're hardening
Blood's not flowing
Only clots
Like your life
You will crash
You will die
But isn't that what you wanted?
What you tried so many moons ago?
You failed, your will gave in
Do they know about that?
I've been inside of you
I've felt your pain
I've imagined what it's like
To live a neverending lie
I couldn't live like you
Knowing what I've done
Maybe it's time you throw in the towel
And leave the rest of us alone!
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RealmX
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2003-11-16 14:32:06]
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Re: Scorched Heart
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by garyh on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 03:41:55 PM AEST
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| umm... very interesting.... you seem to have a lot of "hate" there for someone.... good write.... |
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Re: Scorched Heart
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 04:06:27 PM AEST
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| i felt emotion as i read this although i find it very hard to hate any body although iv tried. i like the poem its obviously somthing very personnal to you |
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Re: Scorched Heart
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by doug on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:05:22 PM AEST
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| this is a good read hope you write more soon |
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