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Trample me
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:34:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart is here
in the palm of my hand
reach for it
grab it
hold it close
let me in
take a knife and stab it
watch it bleed
as blood falls through your hand
you're in command
hold my heart close again
let me in
rip it away
hold it
throw it against the wall
stand and stare as I take another fall
Pick my heart back up
hold it again
once again you let me in
Jenna
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Re: Trample me
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by MarcoTheFish on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 02:33:33 PM AEST
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very good stuff!
reminds me of me a little.
thanks for sharing!
hope to see more soon.
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Re: Trample me
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by irshprnss on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 10:05:35 PM AEST
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I really like this one Jenna! Once again I understand..... Great Write
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Re: Trample me
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:53:05 AM AEST
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| Jenna that was powerful I don't know why you put up with that though. |
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Re: Trample me
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 01:08:44 PM AEST
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Reading this reminds us all only to well, there is a dark side of love, trust me, i too have been there. Very intence and exposing. Good or bad be the situation, your writting is excellent as always, i dare say at time's, even
medicinal.
Ben |
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