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Darkness Is Here
Contributed by
eeka_taquito
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Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 04:56:47 AM in AEST
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darkness is here
it swallows me whole
drags me down
beats my soul
calls me names
ignores my cries
laughs in my face
tells some more lies
alone down here
forgotten by the world above
dying inside
can't find the love
brought down
by those who surround
i let my head hang
all my eyes see is ground
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2003-11-16 04:56:47]
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Re: Darkness Is Here
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 05:07:53 AM AEST
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I think we all see the ground much of the time as with a conscience we'd never learh.
Good work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Darkness Is Here
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 05:08:33 AM AEST
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I think we all see the ground much of the time as with out a conscience we'd never learn.
Good work!
peace, joy, luv,
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Re: Darkness Is Here
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:43:41 AM AEST
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very good write.. i've been there before.. try to get out of the dark... there is always hope
peace
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Re: Darkness Is Here
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:36:10 AM AEST
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| Things will get better. Nice write. I hope things start looking up soon. Hey we all look at the ground sometimes. |
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