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Intangible Charade
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
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Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 03:56:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It resides within each one of us
A silent, seamless sheet
Each string a trace to long-lost past
A weave of silver-sweet
It's deep within the wizened soul
A silver serenade
To dreams and wishes long before
The longed, revived parade
It lives in every child's heart
And never stays one shape
An ever-changing photograph
The ruminant moonscape
To some it is life's great mosaic
To others gold aria
But be it tune or scene or shape
It transcends concrete ideas
It may not seem like much right now
Sparse and incomplete
But trust me, when you fill it up
Nothing is as sweet
For memories of every shade
--The blacks and whites and greys--
Are looked upon with great delight
The perfect "good 'ol days"
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EternitysLyre
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2003-11-16 03:56:05]
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Re: Intangible Charade
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 04:11:10 AM AEST
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I think we look for the good ole days at one time or other.
Good work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Intangible Charade
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:02:31 AM AEST
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| More truthful words? I've never read them. Excellent work. |
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Re: Intangible Charade
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by ToriVeigh on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:35:30 PM AEST
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| Beautiful read! After reading your poem, I think it's time to expand my vocabulary so I have more to rhyme with. |
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Re: Intangible Charade
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:14:49 PM AEST
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This is good - in fact it's not good at all - it's 'kin A.
And to think I assumed you were much older, which Is a definite compliment, as you could probably figure . . . |
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