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DON'T PLAY WITH ME!!!
Contributed by
emystar
on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 02:35:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Ya, kn ur always here
no matta wher ,I go!
What is it 'bout me
that facinates u so?
Don't play with me!
If ya want my attention
u must b kind,
no lieing or hate invention!
My inner vision's real keen
can see inside u 2,
past your emotional outburst
even if u r faking r blue!
So many have tried
2 erase my own brain
U cry, me, I, poor me
when it's u that's insane!
Copyright ©
emystar
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2003-11-16 02:35:31]
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Re: DON'T PLAY WITH ME!!!
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 02:56:46 AM AEST
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| i'm not sure if this is meant to be funny, but i found it to be intensely so. Its like the babbling rant of a mad person. Very nice |
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Re: DON'T PLAY WITH ME!!!
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 03:36:32 AM AEST
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Interesting...
Emma. |
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Re: DON'T PLAY WITH ME!!!
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 11:47:38 AM AEST
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good write.. interesting poem but good
peace
JENNA |
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Re: DON'T PLAY WITH ME!!!
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 01:28:04 AM AEST
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| This was pretty good emy |
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Re: DON'T PLAY WITH ME!!!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 11:21:58 PM AEST
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You tell 'em grrlfriend...
Hugs
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