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My Prison
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
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Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 02:25:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There are people all around me
Some closer to me than others
What I don’t show, they can’t see
Let that close, not even my lovers
Why do I hide from you?
Only showing what you want to see
Can you see that’s what I do?
You know very little of me
I don’t know if you want to try
To know me and me know you
I only know I want to cry
I can’t give to you what is due
You deserve to be given everything
A whole heart you should receive
Your heart and soul are breathtaking
These things I truly believe
My heart is shattered and torn
I think you deserve to know
My soul feels old and worn
Because I am my own worst foe
Of wall building, I’m capable
High around the inner me
To avoid the unspeakable
To ensure that you don’t see
The inner me is ever alone
But craves some company
How can you get past the stone
Of the prison that is me?
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2003-11-16 02:25:51]
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Re: My Prison
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 02:49:56 AM AEST
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Yeah, I think we all got one of them!
Very stout write here with so much truth for us all!
peace, joy, luv,
emy
we all must find our own happy medium inside our own seles. We can point the way but it's such an individual thing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: My Prison
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 03:29:42 AM AEST
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Whoah this was awesome. So sad, but I can definately understand. I really really liked this. Possibly because I know exactly this kinda situation. Great write...thanks for sharing. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: My Prison
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:07:32 AM AEST
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| What's left to say? I feel you 100% on this one, as I too have descended that particular staircase. |
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Re: My Prison
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by Pasta on
Thursday, 11th December 2003 @ 11:52:36 PM AEST
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| sounds like the walls of Jericho |
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