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Dripping
Contributed by
sindi-selde
on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:56:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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theknifeohgodohgodohgoddoiwanttoidontknowdoidoitellmesomeonehelp-
shh
footsteps click
hardwood floor
razorishererazorisjustherehyismyroomsomessyrazorwhyamidoingthis*****itallrazorwhereisit-
shhhh
she is coming
nocandlehowcantherebenocandleilovemycandlematchesmatchesahcandlematchesmatches
hurry
iwillcutandburnanddripwithbloodandwaxandtearsandthesaltwillhurtyesineedit
hurry...
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2003-11-15 22:56:47]
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Re: Dripping
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:25:51 PM AEST
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Took a bit of concintrating to actually read it...but I got it by the end...sad...hurting and really wanting to hurt...sad.
Emma. |
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Re: Dripping
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 02:12:11 AM AEST
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| stream of consciousness.... i like it, but you could have said so much more. Next time you use this style, add in some of the emotions and not so many repeated words. |
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