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Standing in the Cold
Contributed by
Rissa
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 09:15:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So what now?
Where do I go?
You left me standing in the cold.
Ignoring pleas for understanding,
Hundreds of confessions left untold.
So don't look back,
Leave: I don't care.
I won't protest that it's not fair.
You were all I had to hold on to,
You were my Savior, unaware.
Walking away from you
Putting it all behind.
Regret and fear intertwined
But I won't look over my shoulder
To the pain I won't consign.
Copyright ©
Rissa
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2003-11-15 21:15:58]
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Re: Standing in the Cold
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:52:55 PM AEST
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Great venting!
Good work!
I like the positive ending!
Hang tufpeace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Standing in the Cold
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:11:17 PM AEST
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Quote - "You were my Savior, unaware." - Some people just don't know what they mean to other people...it's sad. This experience that you went through is sad too. And even though he was leaving, you still felt like you had to do something to stop the hurt and you walked away from him...I can relate. Quote - "But I won't look over my shoulder, to the pain I won't consign." - Good thing to do, pain isn't something to sign for...if at all avoid it or soften the blow. A great write. Thanks for sharing.
Emma.
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Re: Standing in the Cold
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 06:28:34 PM AEST
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That is some very powerful words.
I liked it a lot, good use of your frustration. THankyou for tuching me with your gift! |
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Re: Standing in the Cold
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:21:30 PM AEST
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Wow..this is extremely well written... it is very touching ...and I loved your outlook on the situation....Cherish it while it lasted but don't dwell on it too much that it hurts you...
Hugs
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Re: Standing in the Cold
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 12:17:28 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, powerful poem |
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Re: Standing in the Cold
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 03:27:17 PM AEST
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Moving, yet resolute.
Another impressively expressive write. |
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