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Little Miss Orchid
Contributed by
baronhawk
on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 04:25:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like a dream
upon a dark slumber
Like a breeze
upon a hot summer
You bring to me
a spark of fire
To light my heart's
dying ember
Like a song
of sweet harmony
Like a picture
of infinite beauty
You have woken
inside of me
Love that I thought
was not to be
Like the sun
on the first of spring
Like the flower
as it starts blooming
You brought me hope
a new beginning
The warmth of love
to a heart that's freezing
Copyright ©
baronhawk
... [
2003-11-15 16:25:59]
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Re: Little Miss Orchid
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 04:27:52 PM AEST
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| Very nice and sentimental. Nice write. |
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Re: Little Miss Orchid
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by garyh on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 04:34:54 PM AEST
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| good write, you feel like you really love this person.. i hope you two stay together for a long time. |
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Re: Little Miss Orchid
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:28:53 PM AEST
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Awesomwly beautifull!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Little Miss Orchid
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 05:40:37 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write ... soft and romantic ... Jan |
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