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climbing the hill
Contributed by
loopylou
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 03:28:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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looking towards the mound of ground
one that almost reaches the sky
i start my treck up the hill
carrying a heavy sack of things iv gather on the way that i consider important
climbing and scrambling
along tuff terfs
avoiding ditches
but still i manage to fall through invisble ones
and when i look down from the great height i think i have accomplished
it never seems im to far from where i was before
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Re: climbing the hill
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 03:51:30 PM AEST
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| Ah the long journey uphill. I like how you conveyed the feeling of it. |
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Re: climbing the hill
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by garyh on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 04:22:03 PM AEST
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| nice write. you use good descriptions on what its like.. thanks |
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