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Fracture
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 03:00:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Push you again
but you just
won't go down,
but I see that
I've hurt you
this time around.
You tangle with me
while weeping inside
now how do you
do that while
trying so hard.
I'm dying to know
what drives you so far.
Your heart soon will
break if you don't make
your move.
I've told you
to go for that
person my dear.
You hold up
too many you need
some support
wish I could give
you what you needed
but it's really not my place.
All I can do
is relieve some
of the tension
but much like you
I support many others.
The book of the Damned Spirit
Copyright ©
Cobalt
... [
2003-11-15 15:00:32]
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Re: Fracture
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 03:41:01 PM AEST
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Damned if you do, damned if you don't huh?
I know that feeling.
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Re: Fracture
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:42:54 PM AEST
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I hear ya.
very good work and I know the feelings, well1
peace, joy, luv,m
emy |
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Re: Fracture
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 11:30:38 AM AEST
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Nicely done...
Jenni |
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Re: Fracture
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by pixie on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 07:17:12 AM AEST
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that was a very good write, enjoyed it,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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