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The Night
Contributed by
RealmX
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:25:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I gaze thoughtfully at the moon
The fog is making it fuzzy
Drifting to and fro
I wish the stars could shine through
Break through the hazy curtain
So I could see them twinkling
And dancing in the night sky
The musky smell reminds me
A time forgotten, far off
But sweet is this heavy air upon my lips
As I make my way through the night
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2003-11-15 14:25:01]
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Re: The Night
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by sugar0986 on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:33:04 PM AEST
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I like this poem, good job.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: The Night
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by garyh on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 04:49:45 PM AEST
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| i like this also... nice write you put a great picture in my mind ;) |
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Re: The Night
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by doug on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 07:10:16 PM AEST
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| i really liked this poem. it reminded me of my nights driving and those were great times |
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