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the things she will never kno
Contributed by
angel_facing_judgement
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:36:44 PM in AEST
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My name is destiny this is my story. i would have been 1 today and would have taken my first steps and would have loved to watch my mommy smile. My birthday would have ben jan.5 and my favorite color would be spring time yellow. I would have loved flowers trees grass and dirt.....i would have wanted to ride a pony when im big enough and to have went to school when im 5.......i would have loved the zoo....i wanna kno what my mommy like and what my daddy likes... but ...ill never turn 1 or take my first steps... ill never see my mommy smile. Ill never kno my mommy ill b
never kno my daddy....i will never know my favorite color or whetther i lilke floweres trees grass and dirt...ill never go to school or ride a pony when im big enough and ill never see a school....ill never love the zoo...ill never kno anything.. well maybe one thing..ill go to heaven to watch over my mommy and the doctor my mommy paid to kill me today... god please forgive mommy and the doctor they didnt really wanna do it.. how do i know? because today.. i saw my mommy crying
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Re: the things she will never kno
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:20:27 PM AEST
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oh this brought me tears so very sad great write on a touchy subject.
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Re: the things she will never kno
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:30:11 PM AEST
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| I am.. for all intends and purposes a man for whom the only point of life is survival and for whom hope has no meanings. I thrive on despair and other deeply dark emotions. However this poem has touched a chord even in me. I advocate surendering to despair but perhaps...I do harbor some contentions of hope and the future. I myself am not married and if things go as downhill as I am going, I will never father a child of my own. However after my father's passing and now as an uncle I have been involved in the upbringing of two brothers and two nephews. What I have learned is that a child is perhaps the worst thing in the world to take care of and there comes a time that I harbor thoughts of torture and other unpleseantness on children under my care. But given that...I have also learned about the magic of watching the growth of a living being and of nurturing....a child...it gives me great happiness to be a part of my brothers' and nephews' lives and it is nice when they look up to me as someone who is their big brother or uncle. It saddens me that someone would dare to comtemplate such a thing as to end a life before it even began...oh well...I must go back to being my dark and desparing self now....maybe your friend would reconsider....as for you....congratulations and good luck in your journey as a parent.....it is an experience that you will certainly have lots to write about in the future.....of course I myself have no direct experience but my parents, friends and siblings seem to enjoy being a parent.... |
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Re: the things she will never kno
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by WiLlYwOnKa on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:32:31 PM AEST
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| Very Touching. You reached into me and grabed my soul. |
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Re: the things she will never kno
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 04:25:10 PM AEST
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First off, congratulations!. A very touching write... it brought tears to my eyes... I hope she hasn't done it yet....
Jenni |
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Re: the things she will never kno
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by harshreality on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 04:41:31 PM AEST
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| so touching. |
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Re: the things she will never kno
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 07:07:16 PM AEST
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| you made this mommy cry....... |
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