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POEMITIS
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 08:48:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Be still my mind!
No more poems find!
The crank is slow....
Needs greased, 'tis low.....
My "Mind's Eye" exhausted!
Blood shot, and red!
Millions of images
tap dancing in my head!
Finger tips calloused, hard.
Bounced on keyboard, diehard.
Finger nails split!
Misfit, half-wit, dimwit!
This business of rhymmmming
timming, wifffing, woooooing,
whirrrrrling, twirrrrling, currrling,
peeeeking, peeeeeping, sailllling,
reappppping!
I feel like leappping
from a bridge...
Another image as over I go!
Oh, No, a poem that
has to be written down below!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
I'm tried of being
a poetess.....
November 2003
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2003-11-15 08:48:52]
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Re: POEMITIS
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 09:10:37 AM AEST
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refreshing
Shari |
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Re: POEMITIS
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by norm on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 10:54:51 AM AEST
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The usual good poetic thinking
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Your poetic protest is far too late
Your work already sealed your fate,
There ain't no way to stop your do,
whene'er a thought does enter you.
You'll write your write, scream your scream
Not to work is just a dream,
so do your do, hurrah for you.
We'll all enjoy what you produ..
normword:produ=produce |
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Re: POEMITIS
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:22:54 PM AEST
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| That was really good. I hope this doesn't mean you are leaving us. |
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Re: POEMITIS
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:43:40 PM AEST
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| Ha Ha Ha HA....I really like this one! You have a gift dear friend... for I have long given up on laughter and I found it rarely nowadays...but you have given me one..today...at a very opportune time. Anyway nice work. In another sense..less amusedly..I must agree with you...sometimes the gift of peotry can be a curse. I share a similarly malady though it is not the curse of poetry. It is the curse of thought.. I can't seem to stop thinking...literally...everything I see I must try to figure out...it is rather tiring...a kindred spirit in a sense to your suffering...ha ha ha ha ha nice one. |
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Re: POEMITIS
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:30:34 PM AEST
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Conni conni you never cease to amase me with the poems you come up with your so gifted and such a great imangination wonderful. Glad Iv had a few minutes to breath and come and read my favorites poets works!1 Ill email you soon!
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Re: POEMITIS
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by Merry on
Sunday, 23rd November 2003 @ 01:00:48 PM AEST
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this is cute - i agree sometimes it is overwhelming and the need to keep writing seems like an obsession - but as long as the words keep comin what can we do.
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merry |
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