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I cry
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 07:00:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I cry
tears like snowflakes upon my face
a gentle touch upon my skin
i hear her words echo through me
pain filled emotions like every letter
missing something so close
within another time
im watching you mum
i miss you to too
please dont cry for me
im forever with you
in a place only you can see
in a place only we can feel
but i am a ghost of your memories now
to be remembered but never felt
i love you mother
im sorry i left
we cry together ...
......i love you
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2003-11-15 07:00:18]
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Re: I cry
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 07:06:42 AM AEST
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| aweee im crying to...reminds me when I lost my sister.I pictured my sister saying this to my mom..awe....thanks for sharing...sandy |
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Re: I cry
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 01:11:23 AM AEST
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Beautifully sad write.
All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: I cry
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by Estelle_Toh on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 04:10:57 PM AEST
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sorrowful.. *tear*
great write!
Estelle |
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Re: I cry
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:26:42 PM AEST
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That is so sad...and a very good poem...Thanks for sharing...Keep writing
Jamie |
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