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Facade
Contributed by
zaowhvn
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Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 06:26:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The smell the year's first rain on black asphalt sends
Shivers up my spine with distant memories
What was once so vivid
Now completely forgotten
Autumn began to fade
As little problems become a big deal
Choosing indifference as a facade
Putting these feelings into words is that of
Explaining what you see when you close your eyes
But this is the best I could do to help you understand my life
And I hope you think about it and relate to it
The sun set with hate last night and didn't rise today
Copyright ©
zaowhvn
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2003-11-15 06:26:36]
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Re: Facade
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 06:38:49 AM AEST
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| Great job. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: Facade
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:31:17 AM AEST
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Favorite lines--- "Choosing indifference as a facade"..... brilliant. And that last line. Also brilliant.
I too look forward to more writing =)
~Ellen |
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