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SUicide committed

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:17:28 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



As I drown in my tears
away go all my fears
no one would give a helping hand
none of them would understand

I lie in my blood as the rain pours dwon
all the people pass me by
looking down and asking why

Suddenly someone stopped and began to cry
because they didn't want me to die
as he sat and looked at me
there I was my spirit finally free

Lonliness was all they could see
I watch as their lives drown in sorrow
they are lost souls wondering aimlessly
there is no one there to set them to the correct path

I am gone
they are wondering waywardly in sorrow
if only i had knew about what was ahead tomrrow
I might have stayed here

Looking down upon them
I feel their gloom
they are all heading for doom

Why oh why did i leave the world so soon?

JENNA




Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2003-11-15 01:17:28]
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Re: SUicide committed (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:22:10 AM AEST
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I really liked this one Jenna.


Re: SUicide committed (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:08:14 AM AEST
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This write was sad for sure...but you're still here for tomorrow and I hope it was what you needed. You are strong and stay strong...even through your poetry. Thanks for sharing this good write. Take care.

Emma.


Re: SUicide committed (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 03:19:41 AM AEST
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Great wrting for a 15 yr old!
Much wisdom in these words1
peace, joy, luv,
emy


Re: SUicide committed (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 05:54:44 AM AEST
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Wow. That one really hit home with me.


Re: SUicide committed (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 11:11:27 AM AEST
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I'm glad you're still here.....

God bless,
Jellybellyprincess




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